Lots of fun in this one, Gary. Sounds a nice place, a good picture.
bw
SallyE
Sally, most cool place to be when not raining.
*
Dear Gary,
I removed a few articles and a phrase.
Best regards,
Deborah
Deborah, I see the second line as needed
descends as the sky crystallizes into stars,
quiet broken only by the hiss of wet wood,
but will think it over.
Thanks.
Gary
|