Thank you for the careful reads and honest comments.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 04.26.03 1:09:27 PM, [log in to unmask] writes:
"Early evening DC simmer shimmers on the kelly lawn"
Not with you on this but I am with you in the remainder of the poem and
enjoyed it. (Not saying that all readers have to follow all parts of all
poems, just giving FB on my reading of this one.)
I agree with Christina on this one. DK "seder" but that's my problem.
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