Thanks Sally, C. and Frank,
The two points are noted.
I can reluctantly use the word "monk" in place of "anonymous".
'cause becomes because.
"as the sun was to set" becomes "as the sun was setting"
It requires a skill to select appropriate words, and good vocabulary to
find one! The whole poetry is to move towards this perfection!
c s shah
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Guest Lecture
Lanky, fair, and clean-shaven,
the monk occupied the guest room
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In the evening-lecture, as the sun was
setting in his eyes, the guest pointed out:
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c s shah
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