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Re: NEW: The Gallery Scene
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Ryfkah * <[log in to unmask]>
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The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
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Thu, 24 Apr 2003 10:47:36 EDT
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Shalom c s shah I like the historical vision here in your poem; I don't think you need the last two lines; it tells the reader what he/she already gleans from the verse. kol tuv, Ryfkah
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