Hi Gary,
I agree with you it is a little confusing there. I've tried to fix that.
Also in the other places you've mentioned - too many words when not needed
in a few places.
Snip.
Cheers and thanks,
Frank
> Frank, a bit confusing here that your father is one of the three. And
other
> thoughts.
>
> There are three of us in a babbling hotel,
> close to the happy hour.
> He is twenty years older than I,
> six years younger than my father.
> A man full of stories about the town that he left (I would cut when he
was)
> when he was young,
> the town I, too, left as a youth, (and as here)
> and about his family and experiences. (cut and)
>
> Thanks, fine tale.
>
> Gary
>
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