Thanks for the considerate comments.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 04.23.03 6:32:43 PM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< There is a pleasing integrity to your poem. I find great difficulty in
situating the action and characters in time and in relation to each
other. I am not sure whether the history of Fort Dupont should be read
in to the poem, or whether the events depicted could take place at any
other park.
Carl >>
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