I believe you are referring to the gunpowder plant and manufacture of
dynamite, but also the fairly recent incident with John? Deborah
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> Yup, I think this is much better, Carl.
> A few thoughts: reading this as a completely new poem and without any
> background knowledge, I'd ask whether the father was a killer or killed.
I was wondering when someone would mention that! :-)
Just wanted to write in and say that. More later...
Carl
> > The Longwood Story
> >
> > My father killed, and I my father's son,
Deborah Elizabeth Russell, Artist/Poet
Post Poems | Inside | Cityslide
Shadow Poetry | Parallels Words For The Wind
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