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Re: Part-time Painter
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Gary Blankenship <[log in to unmask]>
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The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
Date:
Mon, 21 Apr 2003 14:27:30 -0700
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Just one thing with this piece. In the 2nd last stanza you've personalised the piece and I think it would be better kept in the 3rd person. Works well for me that way.--Frank Frank, thanks. The my gone. Gary
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