Hi Arthur,
A sort of mulagatawny-ish thing that tasted as good as it smelt!
And, with the ice that's solidifying around the snow on the doorstep I'm
hoping tonight's food will be as spicy and chewy and hot!
Bob






>From: arthur seeley <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: new sub:continuum( constitutional unzipped)( Bob)
>Date: Sat, 11 Jan 2003 17:38:39 -0000
>
>Thanks for your reading Bob. What sort of soup would that be?? Something
>hearty and warming I trust. Arthur.
>----- Original Message -----
>From: "Bob Cooper" <[log in to unmask]>
>To: <[log in to unmask]>
>Sent: Saturday, January 11, 2003 12:41 PM
>Subject: Re: new sub:continuum( constitutional unzipped)
>
>
> > Hi Arthur,
> > A quick comment... (while the soup bubbles).
> > This now feels very claustrophobic to me. As if it's life has been
>squeezed
> > out of it. Poems are the spaces as well as the words. I feel it needs
>open
> > spaces, pauses, more white space. I feel it needs space to breath!
> > Bob
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > >From: arthur seeley <[log in to unmask]>
> > >Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
> > >To: [log in to unmask]
> > >Subject: new sub:continuum( constitutional unzipped)
> > >Date: Fri, 10 Jan 2003 16:12:36 -0000
> > >
> > >continuum
> > >
> > >magpies wreck
> > >the corpse of Christmas
> > >strip the pale cage
> > >an orange digger
> > >pecks at rafter- ribs
> > >as the old school
> > >melts into lorries
> > >by the post office
> > >a child tears open sweets
> > >green fingers
> > >prise the Rec. apart
> >
> >
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