In a message dated 04.17.03 5:33:16 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< "Om, Shanti, Om," "Peace, peace, and peace,"
forcing forces of destruction to subdue
in that space of ten by ten feet. >>
Powerful!
Did you consider enjambment between stanzas? Might be effective.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
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