Author, zips do have their limits, but I still see stanzas here
magpies wreck
the corpse of Christmas
strip the pale cage
an orange digger
pecks at rafter- ribs (no dash)
as the old school
melts into lorries
by the post office
a child tears open sweets
green fingers
prise the Rec. apart (Rec. spelled out would be?)
without punc, a smoother read?
Thanks.
Gary
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