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Re: newsub/stench
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Ryfkah * <[log in to unmask]>
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The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
Date:
Sat, 19 Apr 2003 15:24:02 EDT
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The title works fine. I like the subject because it is different. I would like you to see if any prepositional phrases can be dropped; they slow the poem down, such as, "guessed at corpse of cat or dog." kol tuv, Ryfkah
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