> never touch but know the wave with wing tips.
Knowing with wing tips is touching.
> feel the geometry of wind
"geometry of wind" a bit unusual; does not fit.
>
> They fold and fall to the deep,
> for breath after breath are gone from view,
> search amid shadows of the sea,
> where other hunters prowl
> with restless hunger.
Unclear; may be unnecessary.
> White wings reach to the wave's face,
> turn to themselves in momentary mirrors,
a good image.
Yes, the fish are vulnerable; for in the cycle of nature some of them
are meant to be the prey of the birds!
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csshah
Colin dewar wrote:
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> Albatrosses
>
> White wings reach to the wave's face,
> turn to themselves in momentary mirrors,
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