Shalom Bob
Thanks for the thoughtful comments. I've not heard of Cowboy Joe; I am
culturally deprived.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 04.14.03 8:33:33 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< Hi Ryfkah,
A brilliant bitter-sweet poem! Each image/stanza has a depth to be explored
- how many ironies in what's drawn out? Oh so many!
I found, this time I read it tho, the phrase:
"The looting shooting flash"
as a bit over-playful (it reminded me of a line from a song called "Cowboy
Joe" - "a rootin, tooting, (something) shooting ... cowboy joe!" and I felt
you were being a bit more serious than I read it. However my childhood
memory may just be mine...
I'm more than grateful for the read.
Bob
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