Hello Frank,
This piece has a nice energetic and flowing rhythm that moves along smoothly and is easy to read. I also particularly liked the subtle link between listening for life on other planets and religion.
Best wishes, Mike
--- Alkuperäinen viesti ---
a contact for astro-man
he's like an astro-man
at the wireless
sending messages into the sky
waiting for a contact
from far away
in places he has never been
but believes in
with a fervour
like religion
a kind of mania
that drives him every night
even when the sounds
start out with the oooo-eeee-oooo
that hints there'll be nothing out there this time
he keeps turning dials
and sending
heart-felt messages
once he thought he had a contact
with a shooting star
but it passed right through his signal range
so quickly
that now he wonders
and this time he's hoping
for a pulsar
that might hear him
and send a signal back
to say hello in static
or thrum a rhythmic beat
that will let him know for sure
he is not alone
in the universe
an astro-man
a pedant if you start him up
because he still believes
there'll be a signal out there one day
tuned in to his frequency
if he only searches hard enough
and patiently
there'll be a contact
from way out in the great nowhere
someone will hear him
~
Want poetry? Try my Tales of Faust web page at http://tales-of-faust.com/ . Enjoy.
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