Rfy,
Some of the descriptions are very fresh, fitting the topic. However the last
line is a bit cliched.
BW
Colin
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From: "Ryfkah *" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Tuesday, April 08, 2003 1:40 AM
Subject: New Poem: Spring Ahead
> Spring Ahead
>
> When flora bloom, there is love in the world. Rebbe Nachman
>
> Like night filled with streetlight
> time shifts to less darkness
>
> Trees bud adolescent nipples
>
> Iris
> daffodil
> tulip
> dart tongues
> Roses
> presume summer
> raise goliath heads
> kiss the sky
>
> Rains have come and gone
> Birds hemisphere return
>
> The bonds of winter pass over
> Love sets us free
>
> Ryfkah 4/6/03
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