Hi James,
Ta for comment.
I know exactly what you mean and have tried to build a bit more into the
piece, but think I may have killed it. may need to go back to basics and
start again, or, I could just write something else LOLOL
Cheers,
Frank
Want poetry? Try my Tales of Faust web page at http://tales-of-faust.com/ .
Enjoy.
> Like this Frank. Felt somehow it could be tightened to echo the wild
singing
> of Meatloaf. Don't know how you could do that. This is good though I found
> myself yearning for the volume to be turned up even more somehow.
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