Grey as remembered eyes,
flecked and freckled,
smooth as the skin
on the inside of her arm.
Exploring fingers
discover a scar
a blemish too small
for eye, but the nail lodges.
Arthur, I like this introduction of "her", but wonder if couplets would work
better.
Thanks.
Gary
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