he said
I leave the book out on my coffee table
so anyone can take a look
sort of an encouragement - a conversation starter
a lot of the women I know are either models or painters
and they like checking out the images
commenting on the poses and postures
the aesthetics of it
Frank, the beginning seems a bit prosey to me. Later, instead of naked
woman, maybe "nude"
I wonder if the last He said needed if this would work as well with
everything after the opening she said.
Thanks.
Gary
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