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Re: Tidbits
I am thankful to all for favourable comments and encouragement.
Trish wrote: "You're so good at these Shah."
Special thanks!
Re: Doll's house
Christina wrote:
CS, I think this is lovely. The double meaning of the final line is a
such a shock and gives the poem real teeth. I'd consider changing 'as
ivory tower' to 'an ivory tower' and I'm not sure that the 'arm-chair
scholar' is quite the right person to introduce into the picture.
Perhaps an architect?
I appreciate the suggestions.
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c s shah
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