Hi Arthur,
I found the poem a bit 'bulky'. The first stanza drags on.
And many a line is more prose than poetry -
> So he chose this way that skirted the village places
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> She had laid out the table
> in such a way that his back would be towards her.
c s shah
arthur seeley wrote:
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> Hard days on the fells with the flock,
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