Thanks Gary. I'm trying to be precise here as the geese could only see me
with one eye each as the are set on the side of their heads.
bw
James
>From: Gary Blankenship <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: New sub: Snow Geese
>Date: Sun, 30 Mar 2003 08:44:17 -0800
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>James, better. Here
>
>I slope softly along the bankside path
>as both watch me with one eye each,
>their heads move to my motion in unison
>on well oiled hydraulics, their feather, bone
>and sinew, fixed expressions, mechanical.
>
>I wonder at one eye each but offer no alternative. Bankside is a good
>construction.
>
>Thanks.
>
>Gary
>
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