Thank you for your considerate criticism.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 03.29.03 4:23:24 PM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< The effect of this poem is absolutely chilling at the end. I am not fond
of
the "full moon" "Jewish holiday" line as the sound of it falls flat to me;
otherwise, this is fine. And as I said, "chilling." >>
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