James, better. Here
I slope softly along the bankside path
as both watch me with one eye each,
their heads move to my motion in unison
on well oiled hydraulics, their feather, bone
and sinew, fixed expressions, mechanical.
I wonder at one eye each but offer no alternative. Bankside is a good
construction.
Thanks.
Gary
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