Glad you liked it, my friend. Ka-boom is Saturday morning cartoons, I think.
I did have Boom, boom! at one time but that smacked of Vaudeville laughline
drums and a character we had over here called Basil Brush. Thanks for the
read and generous comments. Arthur.
----- Original Message -----
From: "Ryfkah *" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Saturday, March 29, 2003 6:01 PM
Subject: Re: New Sub: The Castle: The Dramatic Monologue
> In a message dated 03.28.03 9:34:36 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
>
> << Boom! >>
>
> Shalom King Arthur,
>
> I like your poem; could rival Shakespeare in spirit.
>
> I don't like Boom - don't know if Slam is any better. Boom reminds me of
> Saturday morning cartoons.
>
> kol tuv, Ryfkah
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