Might be better for not making the allusion to Frost's famous poem. People
seem to do it a lot. Very nice otherwise.
bw
James
>From: Colin dewar <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: newsub/unborn
>Date: Fri, 28 Mar 2003 21:08:51 -0000
>
>Message to the unborn
>
>Inside you mother
>you have grown big enough
>to make yourself felt:
>little love nugget
>that won't allow us to forget
>your presence,
>kicking like a rabbit pup
>against the palm of my hand.
>
>You do not know it
>but you too have the long road to travel,
>will have your chance
>to pass on an unbroken line,
>to read these words and see me buried
>and grow old before the oak
>has finished adding rings.
>
>___________________________________________
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