thinks this works pretty well except that I think the last strophe is far
too dense- as if you've tried to cram too much in. My personal feeling would
be that the poem might gain, rather than lose, if you omitted the last
stanza.
Shouldn't that be 'We suspect Cain fled there,' ?
Kind regards,
grasshopper
Grass, others like it, but I need to think on it.
Thanks.
Gary
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