I'll have a look at that Ryfkah.
Trish
----- Original Message -----
From: "Ryfkah *" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Sunday, March 23, 2003 11:06 PM
Subject: Re: New Sub: Fencing In (A photograph)
> I like your poem in essence; can feel the walk. I am teaching a poem by
> Seamus Heaney called "Three-piece," where the middle part looks like a
tie.
>
> I was wondering if you could somehow restructure your poem so that it
showed
> visually what you are saying verbally.
>
> kol tuv, Ryfkah
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