David,
Suggest "until it is over" for 2 of 4 and "in turn" for 3 of 4.
Colin
----- Original Message -----
From: "D.C Bursey" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Sunday, March 23, 2003 1:04 AM
Subject: Philomena
I talk with the wind,
speak to the water,
I sing to the land
and scream at the sun.
I want to live
until my life is over
then put back my dust
from where it came.
Give me your life
we'll make another.
Give me your hand
we will hold on together.
Give me your love
and I'll love you
in return.
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