Shah,
The end sounds awkward. It's just my opinion. No need to take it seriously.
How about: "for diligence, and for the crops you supply."
Colin
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From: "c s shah" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Sunday, March 23, 2003 1:34 AM
Subject: Enigma: The River
> Enigma: The River
>
> From where does come the power in you
> to rush, and meet the ocean?
> Do you believe in physical laws,
> that you take origin in the mountains
> and gain momentum while falling?
>
> Or is it your inherent nature
> to struggle and reach the source?
> If this be true, I salute you twice:
> for exhibiting unflinching diligence,
> as also for the grains you supply.
> ~
>
> c s shah
>
>
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