Shah,
A moving poem. Sugg's in caps below.
BW
Colin
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From: "c s shah" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Sunday, March 23, 2003 1:36 AM
Subject: The Cementing Factor
> The Cementing Factor
>
> Amidst the wrinkly autumn
> I reflect:
> what was the static thing
> that kept our relationship
> cemented together?SUGGEST: WHAT WAS THE THING THAT KEPT US TOGETHER?
> Was it the once DELETE ONCE glowing skin,
> or mischievous sparkle in the DELETE SPARKLE IN THE eyes,
> or the petal-like inviting DELETE INVITING lips,
> or something beyond all these?
> Must be,
> for nothing of these remains now
> and still you love me and I love you .
> *SOME REDUNDANCY IN THE MIDDLE OF THE POEM. ALSO THE LAST THREE LINES
APPEAR TO OFFER AN UNSATISFACOTRY ANSWER TO THE PRECEDING QUESTIONS. EG WAS
IT THE ONCE GLOWING SKIN THAT KEPT US TOGETHER? YES, IT MUST BE BECAUSE
NOTHING OF THESE REMAINS NOW. SHOULDN'T IT BE: EG "SOMETHING ELSE? FOR
NOTHING OF THESE REMAINS NOW."
>
> c s shah
>
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