David thsi flowed along OK for me until the end - felt a little abrupt and
unsatisfying. I wanted a little more, I think.
Cheers,
Frank
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I talk with the wind,
speak to the water,
I sing to the land
and scream at the sun.
I want to live
until my life is over
then put back my dust
from where it came.
Give me your life
we'll make another.
Give me your hand
we will hold on together.
Give me your love
and I'll love you
in return.
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