Thanks Christina. I have fiddled so much with this poem that I lost it. Will
find the original which was better. Bw SallyJ
>From: Christina Fletcher <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: New sub Living words
>Date: Wed, 8 Jan 2003 11:44:54 EST
>
>It's a pity that Ryfkah's comment is so spot on, Sally. I love the idea
>and
>I'm sure that a tiny bit of adjusting will do the trick.
>bw
>christina
>
>
> > Living words
> >
> > An embryo of this poem
> > slept in my mind
> > like a comma
> > an undivided thought
> > waiting to be fertilized
> > by the sperm of belief
> > explode into life
> > like love.
> >
> > Sally James
>
>
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