CS,
I like the first half of the poem, but I'm not sure that I can follow the
connections in the second half. I guess I am not sure that I know enough
about the female figure who appears in the second half.
I enjoyed reading the poem, however. My favourite line is the third. Life
and poetry go at their own speeds.
BW
Colin
----- Original Message -----
From: "c s shah" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Tuesday, March 18, 2003 6:49 AM
Subject: intro.
> I hope you won't mind one novice amongst you!
>
> c s shah
> M 55
> India
> --
>
> The Wait
>
> Clouds came from the West
> as monsoon kept its appointment.
> I wasn't ready with my poems yet;
> said: "won't you come later?
> You may visit her first,
> she needs you more,
> for I see her eyes are tired."
> *
>
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