In a message dated 03.17.03 10:02:39 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< There's a black hole
in the middle of my chest
next to my heart,
not there anymore
and the ring that you gave me
left a light spot on an older finger. >>
Wow I really like this stanza and whole black hole metaphor. I wonder if the
last stanza says too much after all the well written inference above.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
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