Still, I was left wondering, if I understand correctly the hint in
"first ring" then the time is even before marriage which should have an
entirely different feeling. This poem feels to me like the mood of an old
man, something like Ecclesiastes.
Tammara
Tammy, at least the hindsight that the relationship was a bust at the start.
Happens often enough.
I gotta do something about that E feel. I seem to slip into to often these
days.
Thanks.
Gary
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sí, balas no!
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