Villanelle and pantoum thoughts duly noted and amended.
bw
James
>From: arthur seeley <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: New sub: An Endorsement For Patricia
>Date: Fri, 14 Mar 2003 10:38:40 -0000
>
>Of course I mean villanelle. LOL I have that many forms ticking over that
>confusion reigned in the filing cabinet I call my mind. So given that your
>last form was a pantoum, I think , my last e-mail should read " Hey. James
>.
>A good villanelle, etc etc etc " please amend accordingly. Arthur.
>----- Original Message -----
>From: "James Bell" <[log in to unmask]>
>To: <[log in to unmask]>
>Sent: Friday, March 14, 2003 8:52 AM
>Subject: New sub: An Endorsement For Patricia
>
>
> > This is based on a relationship I had with someone who is now in the
>acting
> > profession. We parted on fairly amicable terms, I think.
> >
> > AN ENDORSEMENT FOR PATRICIA
> >
> > Kissing Patricia was something of great pleasure
> > although she was someone whom I hardly knew,
> > for our love was fickle, like the weather.
> >
> > When our lips bonded with tight measure
> > for months, during which our bodies drew
> > close together, was something of great pleasure.
> >
> > Still, our frantic kissing was not a treasure,
> > tight clinches in the park our only due,
> > for our love was fickle, like the weather.
> >
> > Our public tongue work may have caused one seizure,
> > though we were oblivious at attempts to sue
> > for kissing Patricia was something of great pleasure.
> >
> > When we decided to split it was such a clever
> > career move, something we never knew
> > was inevitable for fickle love, like the weather.
> >
> > Now she'd love to become a fickle national treasure
> > and I've written this for her and all of you
> > to say: kissing Patricia was a great pleasure
> > though our love was fickle, like the weather.
> >
> >
> >
> > bw
> > James
> >
> >
> >
> >
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