Thanks for the crit and keep it coming,
Colin
----- Original Message -----
From: "Frank Faust" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Thursday, March 13, 2003 3:59 AM
Subject: Re: newsub/poseidon
> Enjoyed the imagery and ideation of this Colin. Novel thoughts that convey
> well.
>
> Cheers,
>
> Frank
>
> > Conversation with Poseidon
> >
> >
> > Seeking to show Earth's treasure to another
> > I have flung to the waves
> > what I loved on land.
> > This done I found
> > all transformed in the image of the sea.
> > The scarab beetle became a crab,
> > the winter blackbird turned to coal fish,
> > fields of hay were sea grass
> > and the rice grains, pearls.
> > Finally I flung to the waves the sun and moon
> > but they too drowned in those fertile depths,
> > becoming a tapestry
> > of watered light.
> >
> >
> >
> > ______________________________
> >
>
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