Roger,
Consider the saithe sorted.
I appreciate you attention to detail.
Thanks,
Colin
----- Original Message -----
From: "Roger Collett" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Monday, March 10, 2003 9:18 PM
Subject: Re: newsub/poseidon
> Love this Colin, not quite sure about the line breaks but it reads well.
> Only quibble is that coalfish should be one word.
>
> Best
> Roger.
>
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Colin dewar" <[log in to unmask]>
> To: <[log in to unmask]>
> Sent: Monday, March 10, 2003 8:23 PM
> Subject: newsub/poseidon
>
>
> > Conversation with Poseidon
> >
> >
> > Seeking to show Earth's treasure to another
> > I have flung to the waves
> > what I loved on land.
> > This done I found
> > all transformed in the image of the sea.
> > The scarab beetle became a crab,
> > the winter blackbird turned to coal fish,
> > fields of hay were sea grass
> > and the rice grains, pearls.
> > Finally I flung to the waves the sun and moon
> > but they too drowned in those fertile depths,
> > becoming a tapestry
> > of watered light.
> >
> >
> >
> > ______________________________
>
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