Christina, good but a couple of thoughts
nibble your rim with smug, disgusting teeth.
I have trouble with the image of the dealing tasting the bowl. Does that
really happen?
And in Psalter, 1888 you wrote
I'll say you squeal at night.
I wonder if I say you'll squeal at night works.
Thanks.
Gary
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