There are about thirty to forty registered with about 20 to 25 actively
posting. Responses to your work will vary. You will learn to cope with it.
Like a class of noisy kids most of the time!! LOL. Actually some worthy,
kind and helpfully responsive poets. But that's just my opinion. Enjoy it!
Arthur.
----- Original Message -----
From: "Trish Harewood" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Sunday, March 09, 2003 12:56 AM
Subject: Re: New Sub:Note From A Hotel
> Thanks Arthur, I think subtle fits in better with the other sounds too! It
> also begs the question on how subtle the lighting really is, being placed
> with such ordinary items as the TV and the Iron.
> Ta very much, Trish
>
> PS By the way, I'm feeling a bit overwhelmed with the sheer volume. How
many
> people belong to this workshop?
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "arthur seeley" <[log in to unmask]>
> To: <[log in to unmask]>
> Sent: Saturday, March 08, 2003 12:16 PM
> Subject: Re: New Sub:Note From A Hotel
>
>
> > Hi Trish. I got the name right this time! LOL
> > I like the way you have woven everywhere, somewhere, anywhere and
nowhere
> > into the fabric of the poem. It runs like a metallic thread through it
or,
> a
> > better description, it chimes softly. You might like to consider '
> > concealed' rather than 'subtle' although 'subtle' has a more muted
> vowelling
> > where concealed has sharper vowelling to it. 'subtle' is closer to the
> rest
> > of the sounds in the poem. Just some thoughts.Regards Arthur
> > ----- Original Message -----
> > From: Trish Harewood
> > To: [log in to unmask]
> > Sent: Friday, March 07, 2003 8:33 PM
> > Subject: New Sub:Note From A Hotel
> >
> >
> > Note From A Hotel
> >
> > Something about this place
> > has followed me everywhere.
> > The white towels, tiny soaps
> > and shampoo
> > I have seen somewhere before.
> > The T.V. Iron and subtle lighting
> > could be from anywhere.
> > Only the feeling that you should be here
> > comes from nowhere.
> >
> > Trish
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