Dear Gary,
I like this, it's as brief as it would be in this situation. I wished you
had used "ladybirds", instead of "ladybugs". That bugged me!
Trish
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From: "Gary Blankenship" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Friday, March 07, 2003 5:55 PM
Subject: Re: New sub: Bang
we knew and all dropped
to the carpet. In that instant
before the sun devoured me
I thought of the garden outside
the larkspurs, ladybugs and robin,
all innocent as Eden.
In reality, of course,
there would be no time
for theology
Grassy, fine work. I wonder if the end would work as was no time for.
Thanks.
Gary
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