DC,
It's hard for me to criticse this poem. It's easy on the tongue and the
tenderness of sentiment is sustained from first to last. I've read it a few
times. It travels.
Thanks,
Colin
----- Original Message -----
From: "D.C Bursey" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Thursday, March 06, 2003 9:02 PM
Subject: My Love
> Let me love you
> on the first night of forever,
> whisper love songs
> until you fall asleep.
>
> Let me read you
> a poem in the morning.
> Let me breathe you
> like my first and last breath.
>
>
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