Hi Pete,
beautiful poem with vivid images
I like theses lines.......................
........green shade
that autumn tinted
glasses bring.
Welcome!
davidc
Pete wrote:
> First time here, not sure if this posting is going to work, so apologies in
> advance for any strange occurences. Any comments welcomed.
> Pete
>
> The Passing of Autumn
>
> Low in deepened sun,
> green shade
> that autumn tinted
> glasses bring.
> Spring youth
> worn summer thin,
> discarded now
> for darker cloth
> long grooved
> from stubble fields;
> unburnt, stacked with straw
> as if the ears
> were beaten from old carpets
> and the leavings rolled
> to rest on stalks
> that booted feet
> break like quiet falls
> of ice dulled nails.
>
> 09.12.2002
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