Thanks for the considerate input.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 03.04.03 5:57:14 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< Hi Ryfkah,
This is a gentle wandering poem that holds everything it's disclosing so
easily together. yet it's also tough!
The second time I read it, though, I wondered if the words cacophony and
howl are both needed? I sense one of the words may be enough... or replacing
one of them with a word that isn't so synonomous with the other.)
Bob
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