Christina, well done. Here consider an alternative start and Title
Dry Drunk
They say it's a cry for help: that in recovery -
dry but not truly sober - the thinking's clouded,
A Cry for Help
in recovery dry but not truly sober/thinking clouded.
Thanks.
Gary
Feb CE Chaffin, Celebrations and Blessings at:
http://gardawg.homestead.com/gardawg.html --- Writer's Hood at
http://www.writershood.com/... Poets for Peace.... ˇPoemas sí, balas no!
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