In a message dated 03/04/2003 8:31:01 AM Central Standard Time,
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<< ticks that measured time
> decorate the dark surface,***this line doesn't scan well for me. do you
> mean decorates? >>
Ticks is a plural subject so you have to have a plural verb. It is really
interesting that in most instances you like the earlier more spontaneous
version best. I have worked on it now to the point that I must leave it
alone. I did write one more final FINAL version after this one, but don't
think I will post it just now. I do thank you, Barbara, and I appreciate all
your ideas. Sue
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