A great word picture. Like guided imaging? The "black steam in a white cup"
yes, yes. The "neon OPEN diner" - can just see the sign, and it is jazz.
Supercool sexy poem, babe...and watch out for that snake just above the
apple? Philip
>From: Ryfkah * <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
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>Subject: Cow Girl
>Date: Sun, 5 Jan 2003 23:48:46 EST
>
>Cow Girl
>
>Called Mother Trucker
>by Sam Dave and Joe
>just named Cow Girl
>by the gals
>I climb in my rig put on
>Diana Krawl jazz out
>into the winter solstice night
>
>The DC Beltway orbits
>I stop at Mel's neon OPEN Diner
>snazzy silver like a train car
>Rosie Jane slaps me on the back
>says hi Cow Girl
>pours black steam into a white cup
>already the steak and eggs on the grill
>the paisley curtains smoke stained
>
>Sam canters in
>smiles his come to me baby grin
>He still
>likes Ravi Shankar
>sports his graying hair in a pony tail and
>smokes weed when laid over for a spell
>Rosie Jane takes a key off the rack
>
>Mother Trucker he whispers
>I giggle at his nakedness except for
>Stetson and snakeskin boots
>wonder who's the serpent
>and where's the apple
>
>Ryfkah 1/5/03
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