I moved the words around and these line breaks wrote themselves into the poem
so alas there they speak as they demand.
:-) kol tuv, Ryfsis
PS. Thanks for the repost.
In a message dated 03.02.03 11:03:46 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< Yesterday's tune plays
as radio speakeasy bootlegs
pirates like skull and crossbone
My child asks why wasn't she born
in the sixties
Ryf, tell her she is not all that lucky, old times are not necessarily
better times in many, many ways.
A fine piece, good beginning and it moves along well.
Not sure of all the line breaks but I never am.
Thanks (and thanks alder for the post).
Garbro >>
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