Shalom James
My lilies can amble as in dancing. Flowers sway in a field when I observe
them. I shall look at vouch but I liked the sound in the line.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 03.01.03 3:04:55 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< A nice crontrast here between the medieval crusades and our current
situation. To quibs. Can lilies "amble" and in S5 "vouched" seems a little
archaic. Over all I enjoyed this very much.
bw
James >>
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